SFF writers need feedback that understands the genres, tropes, world building, magic systems, fictional science, and the speculative. For lengthy works, common in SFF, finding quality feedback can be difficult. Full developmental edits on raw manuscripts are expensive. If you’re a genre writer in a marginalized group, it’s even more difficult to receive quality feedback.

My Critiques are more than a Beta read and less than a Developmental edit.

  • Ideal for manuscripts that have gone through beta reads, but the feedback wasn’t deep or substantial enough before sending to a developmental editor or agent.
  • Perhaps you’ve already received a developmental edit, and you changed the manuscript significantly, but a second developmental edit is too costly.
  • Rather than a full Developmental edit, a Critique may be right for manuscripts that fit tightly in sub-genres like epic fantasy, space opera, fantasy romance, etc.


My approach combines developmental editing and critiques like those found in a workshop. This comprises multiple close readings of the work, delving into not just the mechanics of the piece, but how effective the story is as a whole.

I seek to reveal what the author has elicited (intentionally or not) and review choices of voice, style, and form. I pose questions from the reader’s perspective the author may not have asked themselves.

Critiques start at $27 per 10,000 words: You’ll receive feedback in a multi-page critique on form, meaning, layers, and voice. Each work is unique and every author’s circumstances are different. I work with each author to provide a custom quote. Sample critiques are available if you wish to see how I work. Contact

Terms and Disclaimers
Copyright: The author retains all copyrights.

Confidentiality: All works submitted to the service by authors are under strict confidence. No part of the manuscript, Critiques, or correspondence will be shared with anyone other than myself, the author, or their representative.